Heat wave town

A jaguar stalked some travellers that came from a horse with a great big hump. The vultures flew high in the sky Something miraculous was happening in heat wave town. all creatures great and small were gathering waiting to see what the travelers were doing. 

they walked up to the monkey kings cave and knocked on the door then... 1 2 3 4 baboons jumped out with RAZER SHARP CLAWS  they all said "WHO ARE YOU?" in a deep but loud voice. 

They were black and white with blue bottoms they have red scarfs and one of the kings knight badges. the travellers said nothing the baboons put them in bags and took them to the royal jail. 

They were chucked in the rustiest and dirtiest jail cell they had witch was a pretty nice cell. it had a private bathroom a duck feather bed and even a shelf filled with food. But that was the kings lest favourite cell, the others are much more better. 

The travellers still said absolutely nothing, the monkey king was getting mad he needed answers. The monkey king threaten to put them in a much worse cell if they didn't answer him.That's when they spoke, "we come in peace we just want to know were we are "  the monkey king stormed and left them to rot.

the mall

see: glowing lights, a little car ride only 1$, 

hear:deep fried chips sizzling, kids screaming, cash registars chiging, Karen's Yelling, 

smell: boiling oil, fresh MeAt pattys, 

taste:sweet cotton canday desolving in my mouth, 

feel:tomato sause driping down my arm,

I see rainbow flashing lights coming from the mall as I walk past a little car ride only 1$. HUGE green palm trees wave side to side as I come into the entrance of the mall. Little ghosts hanging up from the roof give me a big spook. 

Kids screaming like a cat that just got all its fur cut off, made me wanna rip my ear drums out. I hear cash registrars chinging from every shop. Karen's yelling "I want my MONEY BACK!!!". The boiling oil makes the sound of deep friend chips sizzling its got my tummy rumbling.

The beef pattys are making my taste buds explode. The chicken nuggies crumbling in my mouth, as I swallow them. The cotton candy is as sweet as a suger cotted apple.

I can smell the fresh meat pattys as I go past. Perfume catches my nose as i walk in to bed bath and beond. The sizzling bath bombs smell like beautiful lavendar.

Notes about Voting

🤡fairground story🥳

 I could see the bright flashing lights from a mile away, getting closer and closer. Stabbing rainbow lights were blinding me as I was heading towards the fairground. The glowing pink smoke coloured the night sky, the giant ferris wheel spinning round and round. The sky was purple with a tint of pink. As I arrived I saw the excitement on peoples’ faces. Mum says “stay close” As we passed the carnies. I head towards the ferris wheel, multiple colours reflect in my eyes. 

                                                                              

Pumping carnival music soothes my ear drums. The movement from the rides makes a loud whirring sound. I could hear muffled chatter in the huge crowd, as joyful screams came from the ferris wheel as I headed over. 

Soft seats of the sturdy metal ferris wheel.  Adrenaline pumping through my body as we reached the end of the ride. Wind softly brushes against my face. Excitement running through my head as we head to the food stands.

The array of different foods smelled so delicious, until the stinky farm animals ruined. Fresh hot dog just pulled from the oven. buttery popcorn popping in my mouth “pop pop”. 

My mouth watering as I pass fresh sizzled sausages on a hotplate. A swell of candy floss flavor as it melts in my mouth. Salty golden chips deep fried just right. Fizzy popping candy exploding in my mouth.

{quick write} the kids on the plane

Two young kids sitting on the wing of a shiny steel plane reflecting into the deep blue top of the plane. Two silver jets right behind them blowing fresh air out. 

Below them is a big river of clouds the softest and fluffiest you can find so white like a newborn lamb that's been covered in bubbles. 

As two cheerful kids laugh and play the engine starts to roar like a tiger that just found its pray. The plane tilted and down when the kids into the clouds  and black...

one opens there eyes to see the other boy holding onto one of the jets they get up on top of the jet and get back on the wing they hold onto the window frames and one of them shouts... look down as he looks down the other one pushes him down and he get sucked into the jet...          

should i do a part 2???